“We all need people who will give us feedback. That’s how we improve.” Bill Gates
ACCT13017 – Financial Statement Analysis
Term 2 2019 by Iris Onvlee
“We all need people who will give us feedback. That’s how we improve.” Bill Gates
ACCT13017 - Financial Statement Analysis 
My Comments
Step 3
I am quite impressed with the quality of work that you have provided in your assignment. I could see that you made sure of analysing every ratio and gave an opinion of it. You had excellent comments on what was happening with your company and I liked that you provided the numbers in screenshots for us to be able to review what was happening. I could see that you had very clear what was happening with your firm and gave strong thoughts and opinions about it.
I could see that the accounting drivers’ comments were lesser, but I had the same problem because I ale=ready like you discussed already in the ratio commentary section, therefore I understand that you provided some extra comments of what was happening in your firm. Maybe you could just have explained a little bit more about what was happening with every accounting driver relating it to the economic and business realities for extra information.
Step 4
You did a good job looking for different economic drivers that were related to your firm. I could see that you matched the economic drivers with the accounting drivers and gave an opinion according to the numbers you got from the key value drivers. However, I think some of the comments you could have included in Step 5 as well
I love the way that you use expressions to communicate what you are feeling, and it is a great way to make people engage with the reading of your assignment. I also liked that you did more than what we were supposed to and extend your comments combining them with some of the examples in the study guide and make your own maths of what was happening.
Step 5
I liked that you followed the strategy of explaining this step as Martin said in the assignment sheet. It was very clear to read how you valued your business and how it works. You had very strong thoughts and explained as well what you thought about what was happening every year. Also, you added comments of your key value drivers where you explained each of the items. I see this step is very complete. I can see that you provided excellent insights into what you have learnt in this unit.
Overall Assignment 2
Excellent job. I hope you do very well. I am very impressed with your work
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